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Re: Please Report Missing and/or Placeholder Text

Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2021 5:47 pm
by PrivateHudson
Glacial planet description: "...sheets of ice to covert most of the...". I suppose should be "cover".

Re: Please Report Missing and/or Placeholder Text

Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2022 9:22 pm
by gaerzi
"<Colony name> has the special resource Gems, which increases..."

Clicking on Gems gives "<missing INFO[Gems]>"

Re: Please Report Missing and/or Placeholder Text

Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2022 8:32 pm
by gaerzi

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  ['hsa']  = desc_format [=[
    
		This location appears to have some critical importance to the
		hyperspace network.  Our physists call it an 'anomalous region' -- a
		point in deep space that the warp lanes connect to, though it contains no
		star system.
  ]=],
Should be physicists.

Re: Please Report Missing and/or Placeholder Text

Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2022 5:44 pm
by gaerzi
Putt-Putt in Paradise:

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  Paradise = [=[its fertility rating is <b>[[Planet Fertility|high]]</b>, so there are no penalties to population <FOOD> putput.]=],
Should be output.


Herbal razzia:

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_ENV["Command Cruiser"] = new_desc_object[[
  The command cruiser adds hangar capacity to a vessel with the other capabilities of a heavy cruiser. It is ideally suited to carrying 
  assault shuttles for use in plantary raids.
]]
Should be planetary.

Re: Please Report Missing and/or Placeholder Text

Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2022 7:52 am
by gaerzi
Start a game as a Tinkers, look at your machine altar on Dzibix.

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		add_marked_text | desc_format | [=[
			[[Machine Altars]] (<MACHINE_ALTAR>) are factories that also serve
			as the Tinkers' connection to their machine god, Dzibix.  For the
			purposes of Labor <WRENCH> yields, machine altars act exactly as
			standard factories.  However, machine altars are also essential in
			maintaining the Tinkers' harmonized state.  Tinkers on planets
			without a machine altar will risk becoming [[disconnected]], leaving
			them apathetic and signifigantly less productive.
			]=]
Both [[Machine Altars]] and [[disconnected]] are broken links; you get <missing INFO[Machine Altars]> and <missing INFO[disconnected]> placeholder text if you click them.

Also, "signifigantly" should be "significantly".

Re: Please Report Missing and/or Placeholder Text

Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2022 4:05 pm
by gaerzi

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      local rem = star.num_planet_build_sites
      if rem== 0
        hover_text..= '\n\nThere are no viable planet construction sites remaining in the system.'
      else 
        hover_text..= format('\n\nThere %s <b>%d</b> planet construction site remaining in the system.',rem==1 and 'is' or 'are',rem)
      end
Missing pluralization for "planet construction site" if there are more than one. The verb conjugation is handled, but not the plural 's' at "site".

Something like:

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        hover_text..= format('\n\nThere %s <b>%d</b> planet construction site%s remaining in the system.', rem==1 and 'is' or 'are', rem, rem==1 and '' or 's')

Re: Please Report Missing and/or Placeholder Text

Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2022 8:38 am
by PrivateHudson
Not sure if message "Humanitys has taken Xxx!" should be fixed - it certainly adds to aliens' alienness.

Re: Please Report Missing and/or Placeholder Text

Posted: Sun May 15, 2022 8:51 am
by gaerzi
The food output description text for arid/desert/steppes worlds does not pay attention to whether they are arable or not. So on an arable world, it'll claim fertility is low for races other than spice mongers, when it is in fact high for land dwellers.

Re: Please Report Missing and/or Placeholder Text

Posted: Wed Apr 12, 2023 6:28 am
by PrivateHudson
Minor nitpick: When choosing construction, on inferno and barren worlds farm is dimmed with the explanation "Farming is not allowed". Who is that mighty authority who does not allow faming? Of course, we, players, know who he is, but maybe "is not possible" would sound better?

Re: Please Report Missing and/or Placeholder Text

Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2023 8:45 am
by gaerzi
Description for primary beams says "... these particles could potentially cases catastrophic damage..."; should be cause.